Wednesday, February 23, 2011

3 Modes of Persuasion Speech - Big Screen TV in My Bedroom

Pathos
I believe that I deserve a big television in my room for many reasons that both benefit you and me. One main reason is that the would be less fighting in the house. There is current one television allocated to me and my sister and several debates arise due to this. Having two different people, one boy one girl, trying to decide between a program can be difficult. The endless yelling must be driving you crazy. Therefore I suggest that I get a television in my room for if my sister were to have one in her room she would never leave for she only comes out to watch television. If I had a television in my room me and my sister would have less fights and the family would be happier.

Ethos

I believe that i should have a television in my room for the simple fact that I would like it. A television would make me happy because it is something that I want to stop arguing with my sister. I am sick of arguing and fighting with her and this compromise would sort out this issue. I could help pay for the television and I need one more than my sister because she rarely comes out of her room compared to me who doesn't spend much time in my room. I would therefore spend more time in my room and be get out of your hair. 


Logos
I believe that I should have a television in my room because it would make me less likely to complain. My sister and I have endless fights about the television allocated to both of us. If I had a television in my room I would be in a good mood from less fights and would be able to relax in the serene environment of my bedroom. This would also make me more happy because I will have something that I like. This will make me more inclined to do something for you such as housework. For these reasons I believe that I should have a big television in my room.

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

What do you notice about the length of the speech?
It is short but to the point
What do you notice about the organisations?
There is a intro body and conclusion 3 parts
What do you think is the thesis of the speech?
Using Pathos to get the country to pull together to make the country something great
Name two techniques (with quotes) which you feel are successfully employed and discuss why you feel they are so effective?
repetition (government of the people, by the people, for the people), alliteration (poor power), emotional tone (dead shall not have died in vain)(shall not perish from the earth), metaphor (birth of freedom) 
Why do you think that the concluding statement is considered so important and powerful by many Americans to this day?
It is the foundation of american culture 

Sunday, February 20, 2011

Susan B. Anthony and Women's Right to Vote and Caesars Funeral Speech

    Friends and fellow citizens: I stand before you tonight under indictment for the alleged crime of having voted at the last presidential election, without having a lawful right to vote. It shall be my work this evening to prove to you that in thus voting, I not only committed no crime, but, instead, simply exercised my citizen's rights, guaranteed to me and all United States citizens by the National Constitution, beyond the power of any state to deny. (thesis and introduction)
    The preamble of the Federal Constitution says:
    "We, the people of the United States, in order to form a more perfect union, establish justice, insure domestic tranquillity, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare, and secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."
    It was we, the people; not we, the white male citizens; nor yet we, the male citizens; but we, the whole people, who formed the Union. And we formed it, not to give the blessings of liberty, but to secure them; not to the half of ourselves and the half of our posterity, but to the whole people - women as well as men. And it is a downright mockery to talk to women of their enjoyment of the blessings of liberty while they are denied the use of the only means of securing them provided by this democratic-republican government - the ballot.
    For any state to make sex a qualification that must ever result in the disfranchisement of one entire half of the people, is to pass a bill of attainder, or, an ex post facto law, and is therefore a violation of the supreme law of the land. By it the blessings of liberty are forever withheld from women and their female posterity.
    To them this government has no just powers derived from the consent of the governed. To them this government is not a democracy. It is not a republic. It is an odious aristocracy; a hateful oligarchy of sex; the most hateful aristocracy ever established on the face of the globe; an oligarchy of wealth, where the rich govern the poor. An oligarchy of learning, where the educated govern the ignorant, or even an oligarchy of race, where the Saxon rules the African, might be endured; but this oligarchy of sex, which makes father, brothers, husband, sons, the oligarchs over the mother and sisters, the wife and daughters, of every household - which ordains all men sovereigns, all women subjects, carries dissension, discord, and rebellion into every home of the nation.
    Webster, Worcester, and Bouvier all define a citizen to be a person in the United States, entitled to vote and hold office. 
     (end of body)
    The only question left to be settled now is: Are women persons? And I hardly believe any of our opponents will have the hardihood to say they are not. Being persons, then, women are citizens; and no state has a right to make any law, or to enforce any old law, that shall abridge their privileges or immunities. Hence, every discrimination against women in the constitutions and laws of the several states is today null and void, precisely as is every one against Negroes.
    Susan B. Anthony - 1873
    Highlight the text where you see the techniques below being used in the speech. When highlighting the text in the speech where one of these techniques is used.
    • Repetition
    • Exaggeration/Hyperbole
    • Generalizations
    • Clichés
    • Statistics/Distortion of facts
    • Imperatives
    • Emotive words
    • Use of imagery/symbolism
    • Puns
    • Use of endorsements/testimonials
    • Rhetorical questions
    • Inclusive language
    • Euphemism 
    1.  the speech is logos for she is using justification to express her rational principle. 'I stand before you tonight under indictment for the alleged crime of having voted at the last presidential election' she is stating her principle rather then generalising.
    2. see above under thesis
    3. see above in speech
    Friends, Romans, countrymen, lend me your ears; I come to bury Caesar, not to praise him; The evil that men do lives after them, The good is oft interred with their bones, So let it be with Caesar ... The noble Brutus Hath told you Caesar was ambitious: If it were so, it was a grievous fault, And grievously hath Caesar answered it ... Here, under leave of Brutus and the rest, (For Brutus is an honourable man; So are they all; all honourable men) Come I to speak in Caesar's funeral ... He was my friend, faithful and just to me: But Brutus says he was ambitious; And Brutus is an honourable man…. He hath brought many captives home to Rome, Whose ransoms did the general coffers fill: Did this in Caesar seem ambitious? When that the poor have cried, Caesar hath wept: Ambition should be made of sterner stuff: Yet Brutus says he was ambitious; And Brutus is an honourable man. You all did see that on the Lupercal I thrice presented him a kingly crown, Which he did thrice refuse: was this ambition? Yet Brutus says he was ambitious; And, sure, he is an honourable man. I speak not to disprove what Brutus spoke, But here I am to speak what I do know. You all did love him once, not without cause: What cause withholds you then to mourn for him? O judgement! thou art fled to brutish beasts, And men have lost their reason…. Bear with me; My heart is in the coffin there with Caesar, And I must pause till it come back to me.
    Highlight the text where you see the techniques below being used in the speech. When highlighting the text in the speech where one of these techniques is used.
    • Repetition
    • Exaggeration/Hyperbole
    • Generalizations
    • Clichés
    • Statistics/Distortion of facts
    • Imperatives
    • Emotive words
    • Use of imagery/symbolism
    • Puns
    • Use of endorsements/testimonials
    • Rhetorical questions
    • Inclusive language
    • Euphemism 
    1.
    He is trying to persuade the audience that Caesar was a honourable man and that he was unjustly referred to as evil.
    2.
    I think that the speech is ethos because it has an element of drama and he is very emotive. ' My heart is in the coffin there with Caesar' This is adding a sense of drama and emotion.
    3. see above

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

3 Modes of Persuasion, and Speech

Logos:
reason or the rational principle expressed in argument or justification.
Pathos:
the quality or power, especially in literature or speech, of feelings of pity, sorrow, etc.
Ethos:
the moral element in dramatic literature that determines character's action rather than his or her thought or emotion.


Speech - 
The any given Sundays speech is Ethos because it  has the moral element. Al Pacino's character is telling them with emotion that he has made all the wrong decisions in life and through this he gives advice to the football team. 

Speech to the Troops at Tilbury

My loving people,
        We have been persuaded by some that are careful of our safety, to take heed how we commit our selves to armed multitudes, for fear of treachery (fear of a traitor killing her); but I assure you I do not desire to live to distrust my faithful and loving people.(trusting people; connecting with them) Let tyrants fear, I have always so behaved myself that, under God, I have placed my chiefest strength and safeguard in the loyal hearts and good-will of my subjects; (trust) and therefore I am come amongst you, as you see, at this time, not for my recreation and disport, but being resolved, in the midst and heat of the battle, to live and die amongst you all; to lay down for my God, (connecting with the troops; personalizing the speech by speaking in first person) and for my kingdom, and my people, my honour and my blood, even in the dust. I know I have the body but of a weak and feeble woman; but I have the heart and stomach of a king, and of a king of England too, and think foul scorn that Parma or Spain, or any prince of Europe, should dare to invade the borders of my realm; to which rather than any dishonour shall grow by me, I myself will take up arms, I myself will be your general, judge, and rewarder of every one of your virtues in the field. I know already, for your forwardness you have deserved rewards and crowns; (showing personal responsibility) and We do assure you in the word of a prince, they shall be duly paid you. In the mean time, my lieutenant general shall be in my stead, than whom never prince commanded a more noble or worthy subject; not doubting but by your obedience to my general, by your concord in the camp, and your valour in the field, we shall shortly have a famous victory over those enemies of my God, of my kingdom, and of my people.

Monday, February 14, 2011

Any Given Sunday Speech Analysis

I don't know what to say really.
Three minutes to the biggest battle of our professional lives
all comes down to today. Moment and urgency
Either
we heal
as a team Thesis
or we are going to crumble.
Inch by inch Chorus
play by play till we're finished.
We are in hell right now, gentlemen
believe me
and
we can stay here
and get the shit kicked out of us imagery - Biblical illusion
or
we can fight our way
back into the light.
We can climb out of hell.
One inch, at a time.

Now I can't do it for you.
I'm too old.
I look around and I see these young faces
and I think
I mean
I made every wrong choice a middle age man could make. Gone to first person
I uh....
I pissed away all my money
believe it or not.
I chased off anyone who has ever loved me.
And lately, I can't even stand the face I see in the mirror.

You know when you get old in life things get taken from you. Second Person - giving advice
That's, that's part of life.
But, you only learn that when you start losing stuff.
You find out that life is just a game of inches.
So is football.
Because in either game life or football
the margin for error is so small.
I mean, one half step too late or to early
you don't quite make it.
One half second too slow or too fast
and you don't quite catch it.
The inches we need are everywhere around us. Single Person Collective
They are in ever break of the game
every minute, every second.

On this team, we fight for that inch.
On this team, we tear ourselves, and everyone around us Climax - lots of repetition
to pieces for that inch.
We CLAW with our fingernails for that inch.
Cause we know,
when we add up all those inches
that's going to make the fucking difference
between WINNING and LOSING
between LIVING and DYING.

I'll tell you this Second Person, Advice
in any fight
it is the guy who is willing to die
who is going to win that inch.
And I know if I am going to have any life anymore Experience, what he knows
it is because, I am still willing to fight, and die for that inch
because that is what LIVING is.
The six inches in front of your face.

Now I can't make you do it.
You gotta look at the guy next to you. Second Person
Look into his eyes.
Now I think you are going to see a guy who will go that inch with you.
You are going to see a guy who will sacrifice himself for this team
because he knows when it comes down to it,
you are gonna do the same thing for him.
That's a team, gentlemen
and either we heal now, as a team, Back to First Person
or we will die as individuals.
That's football guys.
That's all it is.
Now, whattaya gonna do?